Early Morris Poems - Pray but one prayer for me ("Summer Dawn")
Pray but one prayer for me ("Summer Dawn")
Appeared in the OCM, 1856, October, 644, without a title. Also included in The Defence of Guenevere, 1858, 246 with the title, "Summer Dawn." |
OCM, 644 Pray but one prayer for me 'twixt thy closed lips, |
Defence of Guenevere, 1858 ed.Pray but one prayer for me 'twixt thy closed lips, |
Notes:Editorial note to The Defence of Guenevere "Summer Dawn" first appeared, with no title, in The Oxford and Cambridge Magazine for October 1856. If the chief criteria for a sonnet are fourteen lines and a final couplet, then this poem qualifies. But its rhyme scheme, enjambment, and four stressed anapests--not to mention the extra phrase added to line 4--put this poem quite outside either the Italian or the English sonnet tradition. "Summer Dawn" might also be related to the Provencal alba, which was usually a daybreak dialogue between two lovers but in some later versions was addressed to the Virgin Mary. The only prosodic requirement for an alba is that each of its stanzas end with the word "alba," which means "dawn." Note that Morris ends lines 5 and 11 (in the original version) with "dawn." 4. cloud-bars, cf. "barred clouds," Keats' "To Autumn," line 25. |